I like the use of geometric shapes and different color swatches, it sort of feels like a game or even the inside of a machine. I also liked how you used diagonal lines at both ends, because it helps the viewer's eyes jump from one place to the other.
I like how you contrasted the shapes and the grey scale it makes the whole thing unified and I agree with Rachel it does feel like an old video game, but I feel you should work on the frame. Also you have created some F/G with the empty spaces shaped like diagonal lines, but I think you should keep playing with that.
I like how you contrasted the shapes and the grey scale it makes the whole thing unified and I agree with Rachel it does feel like an old video game, but I feel you should work on the frame. Also you have created some F/G with the empty spaces shaped like diagonal lines, but I think you should keep playing with that.
great technical work, I especially like the negative space cut out of the darker values. My eyes jump from one shape to another constantly with this piece.
I think as a whole, you did a good job being able to help the eye contrast different shades and be able to use each shade as a way for the eye to move around the composition. The way each pattern in some areas repeat, but pointing in different directions is a nice touch (ex. circle with long rectangles or rectangles dividing space)
The different shapes created with the 1"x1" swatches gave this composition a lot of movement. For me, since our original base was one- inch squares, my eye immediately jumps to the circles and then the surrounding shapes around it. Besides that, I really appreciate your efforts in painting more swatches to create bigger and more organic shapes. They all look very consistent and clean which unifies the whole piece.
I love that you used pieces left over from the last project as well as incorporated new bigger pieces that you made for this. The use of geometric shapes brings a certain order to the piece even though its technically a cluster of shapes, which comes to mind as disorderly but isn't. And I agree with Christine. The way the pattern repeats with variations of where things are pointing was a great idea.
Thank you guys for all the great advice. I think this crit went really well. It's nice to see and hear ALL of your opinions and thoughts. I feel like we get a lot out of this in a short period of time.
This reminds me of Louis Nevelson's work.Very well executed,and a very strong ambiguous composition.I like that one dark circle where you cut out a strip,I'd like to see more of that kind negative space to create more unity.Overall,very good,as always.
I really enjoy how dynamic the piece feels with all the geometric shapes flowing together.You took advantage of the different shades of grey and added some great contrast.
I like the use of geometric shapes and different color swatches, it sort of feels like a game or even the inside of a machine. I also liked how you used diagonal lines at both ends, because it helps the viewer's eyes jump from one place to the other.
ReplyDeleteI like how you contrasted the shapes and the grey scale it makes the whole thing unified and I agree with Rachel it does feel like an old video game, but I feel you should work on the frame. Also you have created some F/G with the empty spaces shaped like diagonal lines, but I think you should keep playing with that.
ReplyDeleteI like how you contrasted the shapes and the grey scale it makes the whole thing unified and I agree with Rachel it does feel like an old video game, but I feel you should work on the frame. Also you have created some F/G with the empty spaces shaped like diagonal lines, but I think you should keep playing with that.
ReplyDeletegreat technical work, I especially like the negative space cut out of the darker values. My eyes jump from one shape to another constantly with this piece.
ReplyDeleteI think as a whole, you did a good job being able to help the eye contrast different shades and be able to use each shade as a way for the eye to move around the composition. The way each pattern in some areas repeat, but pointing in different directions is a nice touch (ex. circle with long rectangles or rectangles dividing space)
ReplyDeleteThe different shapes created with the 1"x1" swatches gave this composition a lot of movement. For me, since our original base was one- inch squares, my eye immediately jumps to the circles and then the surrounding shapes around it. Besides that, I really appreciate your efforts in painting more swatches to create bigger and more organic shapes. They all look very consistent and clean which unifies the whole piece.
ReplyDeleteI love that you used pieces left over from the last project as well as incorporated new bigger pieces that you made for this. The use of geometric shapes brings a certain order to the piece even though its technically a cluster of shapes, which comes to mind as disorderly but isn't. And I agree with Christine. The way the pattern repeats with variations of where things are pointing was a great idea.
ReplyDeleteYou're craftsmanship and cutting skills are always on point, great job! This piece creates a lot of movement and takes me everywhere. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you guys for all the great advice. I think this crit went really well. It's nice to see and hear ALL of your opinions and thoughts. I feel like we get a lot out of this in a short period of time.
ReplyDeleteI love how retro this looks, the cuts are so neat. My eyes literally travel this is so good it has good composition
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ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of Louis Nevelson's work.Very well executed,and a very strong ambiguous composition.I like that one dark circle where you cut out a strip,I'd like to see more of that kind negative space to create more unity.Overall,very good,as always.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy how dynamic the piece feels with all the geometric shapes flowing together.You took advantage of the different shades of grey and added some great contrast.
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